Hurricane Chronicles RPG
If you enjoy the Naruto series, and enjoy creative and exciting community writing, look no further than the Hurricane Chronicles RPG!

With the roleplay just beginning, we'll hoping for some people to temporarily fill important character roles with non-playable-characters alongside their own player-characters. This includes not only one of the five Kage, but those of the minor countries, leaders in each village's ANBU divisions, and even one of the nine tailed beasts!

If you're interested, message or email Ketchup after registering!
New Beginnings

Thu Apr 10, 2014 10:11 am by Ketchup

Why hello! This is your friendly neighborhood founder, Ketch, and I appreciate you not being frightened away by this overly-obnoxious theme and stopping by to find out more about this fledgling roleplay!

I started this forum by myself, and attempted to get the roleplay off of the ground with a hastily-assembled group of people. Due to real-life commitments, they were unable to stick around and …

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1 [Kirigakure] Week 1: Meisu Jumyo on Sun May 18, 2014 10:02 pm

Sayuri 

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Name: Meisu Jumyo

Age: 12

Village: Kirigakure

Affinity: Lightning

Appearance: Meisu's look is just merely simple enough to describe. Meisu is about 5'1" tall. She has black hair, long enough to reach her back, or hips. She also has a black headband to complete her hairstyle. Meisu has purple eyes. Her clothing is nothing more than a white blouse, with some black sleeves sticking out on the inside. and a light purple skirt, with black pantyhose, a bow near her neck, black shoes, and a purple design near her shoulders and neck, along with her chest.

Spoiler:

Personality: Meisu displays a serious personality, and an intelligent girl, who she lacks hilarity; a three second delay to catch on the joke, or not getting the joke. Period. However, one of her biggest traits would be actually playing "pranks" on others; it would mean being a mocker, pointing out the oblivious in a sarcastic manner, which results to making fun of someone, large words, or borderline bullying. Meisu alsois also an expressionless girl, both on her face, and voice. She shows sympathy whatsoever, as things come and go, and it would be best to move on. Meisu also often likes to stay away from others who think they'll bother her. Though, it can be proven that Meisu can really lose her temper if provoked causing her to speak what she thinks, without any self-control, showing off her actual emotions, if she's overwhelmed by something.

Background: During the academy life, there wasn't nothing too major that spilled in her life. She was born with an older brother and younger sister, and that was that. Back then, though, Meisu was considered one of the wittiest students in the academy, which resulted her to being some sort of "nerd" in that matter. Back then, it was showed that Meisu actually cared for others. She was friendly, caring, and was rarely rude. However, due for receiving much bullying, being called a nerd, being insulted everyday, Meisu decided to throw her nice form into the garbage. She still remained her intelligent side, yes. But, she's changed to being ruder, and heartless to others, which often results her to being put a time out, as they would say. Still, she's been the soulless academy student during her entire genin life, without the gains of any friends, and has eventually graduated as a genin from the academy.

Stats:

Meisu Jumyo - Kirigakure, Genin

Chakra: 1,000
Bukijutsu: 100
Taijutsu: 300
Speed: 300
Strength: 300

Chakra Control: 1,000
Ninjutsu: 1,000
Genjutsu: 0
Kekkei Genkai:


Sample Chapter: The village was nearly at the state of timbering down into nothing but teared down buildings, and lives. Large tides started to crash around the streets, as many people tried to run for their lives, but it was too late. The waves violently stroke on the innocent people, as some began to swim for their lives, while the others drowned, with their lives being paid as a result. Two people were just outside of the raging waves of the villages, as one of them looked terribly injured.

"Damn it, Haruno! Why are you doing this! Innocent people are moribund because of your negligent actions!" Meisu cried. As of now, eleven years later, she was in the battle of her older brother, Haruno who was currently destroying Kirigakure. She wasn't sure about his intentions of doing so, but she knew someone needed to put an end to this mess.

The other man smirked at the injured Meisu, who then shook his head at her words and feelings. "My, my. After years of seeing you being so heartless, so cruel, using such big words, and showing no sympathy for others whatsoever, I think I might have a tear in my eye for the fact that you're actually showing some feelings." He snickered at his younger sibling. "If only you were there to save our only, younger sister. I think she would've applaud for such a personality change." He also added.

Just before the battle, Meisu's younger sister, Yuko, dared tried to stop Haruno from his rampage. Just as Meisu showed up, Yuko was then killed by a lightning beam piercing through her head, right infront of Meisu herself, which caused her to break out, and charge right at Haruno.

Speaking of his words, those sentences caused Meisu to snap a little, thus charging at the boy. As she dashed to the boy, one hand was drawn back before her, as a sky blue colored lightning sphere, the size of a basketball, was then being created. Once she was just about close to Haruno, she then tried to slam it down on his chest, causing him to fall on his back, then to create a large explosion.

Sadly enough, Haruno was quick enough to notice the charged electric sphere, and hastily dodge the attack. This allowed Meisu to instead have her electric sphere make contact with the grounds, causing a large explosion, and the grounds to shatter apart. After the impact, she was seen in a large crater, as she was kneeling on one knee, and one hand on the grounds that was the sphere. She breathed heavily, as she stared into the cracked center within the crater.

Just then multiple electric ball blasts began to rocket out from the air, and straight to Meisu. Lucky enough, she was able to react to the eletric ball blasts. A large, invisible lightning dome began to form around the woman, as the electric balls came about. Soon, they all sticked to her dome, instead of explosions. After a few short seconds later, the dome released the blasts into the air, exploding at random areas.

However, just when the blasts exploded about, a large electric wave struck right towards Meisu. Meisu was rather feeling too much numbness and pain in her body, she wasn't really sure on what to do. Her legs were too numb to even try and throw Meisu out of the blast, and her arms were just about to lose energy in their bones. It looked like there wasn't much to do for her, except to simply accept her fate. At least now, she can be with her sister.

A large gasp sprung from Meisu, as she immediately sat up with her eyes wide open, as she clung onto her blankets, with her head darting around directions around her room, as her series of gasping continued. After a few seconds of her little gasping misfit, she then stopped her a moment, as she relaxed her face. It was all just another crazy dream.

Her dream must've been from the fact that Meisu was just about to go on her first mission with her squad. As being a genin, she was going on a D-Ranked mission, but to her, it felt like it was going to be an S-Ranked mission, life or death.

"Oh... it was all... just a dream." Meisu mumbled to herself. She wiped off the sweat that ran about along her forehead, and slowly shook her head. With a small sigh, she then decided to lay herself back in bed, go back to her little slumber, hoping for a more better dream than an nightmare.

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2 Re: [Kirigakure] Week 1: Meisu Jumyo on Sun May 18, 2014 11:38 pm

Ketchup 

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Alright, aside from some grammatical errors and run-on sentences, the app looks good.

Sayuri wrote:Meisu displays a serious personality, and an intelligent girl, who she lacks hilarity

Meisu displays a serious personality, and is an intelligent girl, though she lacks hilarity.

Sayuri wrote:Though, it can be proven that Meisu can really lose her temper if provoked causing her to speak what she thinks, without any self-control, showing off her actual emotions, if she's overwhelmed by something.

Though, it can be proven that Meisu can really lose her temper, if provoked, causing her to speak what she thinks without any self-control. He actual emotions show when she's overwhelmed by something.

Work on condensing your thoughts in each sentence. Try to say one or two specific things, get one or two points across with each sentence. Don't be afraid to use commas and periods often.

It helps slow the flow of thoughts from your head to the writing.

With that said, however, you are approved.


  1. Go ahead and post your character profile in the Roster forum for Kirigakure. Keep everything related to Meisu there including techniques, items, and all your non-playable-characters.
  2. When we finally get things kicked off here, you'll post your stats in the Big Bingo Book in the Week 1 thread I'll start then.
  3. Similarly, your sample chapter will also be your first writing for Week 1. You'll post it in the Hurricane Chronicles forum with this title:


[Kumo] Week 1: Title

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